Just another day in class
Or so I thought
Actually a portal to the past
A portal into WWI
First the reasons
Then the players
Next the trenches
Last the treaty
These are the pieces
Not the experience
Just the facts
Not the horrors of war
Nothing about the feeling of gas
Or the victims caught without a mask
Nothing about the fire of guns
or the smell after a bomb blast
Nothing about the fear of death
or the screams and cries that come with loss
Nothing about the horrors of war
Or the monstrosities of war crimes
The trenches were terrible;
colapsable and fowl
The fields were fierce;
Open spaces of death
The battles were bad;
Neverending waves of slaughter
The war was worse;
The deaths of millions of faceless soldiers
This was not an ordinary class
This was an experience
An experience of WWI
An experience of the horrors of war
image citations:
http://www.vickersgun.com/images/vickersww1-2.jpg
http://scharch.org/Ray_Baer/Prtrt%20-Kaiser%20Wilhelm%20II.JPG
http://www.army.mil.nz/nr/rdonlyres/5d0f436d-ad66-49bb-af53-b0bdbc6ae291/0/aw0608046.jpg
http://www.arlingtoncemetery.net/unknown-wwi-loc02.jpg
http://cgi.ebay.com/WW1-ORIG-PHOTO---COVERING-DEAD-SOLDIERS-WITH-OVERCOATS_W0QQitemZ180321374603QQcmdZViewItemQQimsxZ20090119?IMSfp=TL090119126005r6736
1 comments:
I think you've done a wonderful job in sending the message to the reader and it makes people think deeply. It's also very easy to understand while there are similies and vivid description. Even though the poem seems very long it's not boring and it keeps the reader interested in the poem. I also like how you started the poem!
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